Question:
Choose a plot please!?
Kayla
2012-05-04 17:32:42 UTC
Quick Synopsis:
Plot 1: Caroline was Ambrose's top role model until her parents split and she moved with her mom to New York deserting her southern roots. But when her mom and boyfriend is killed in a car wreck where she was driving she is depressed and has to move in with her dad. She reconnects with her childhood best friend Levi and starts to fall from him. But then she starts seeing Mason, her dead boyfriend, in town and other places and she is confused. Basically Mason talks to her and tells her he is still alive and he was never killed just her mom. Caroline is thrown into a love triangle where some secrets are deeper than what most girls can take. Basically Mason is a werewolf and Levi is his brother and Caroline has to choose between them. I was wondering if Caroline should be a witch? A succubus? Any ideas??

2 plot : Bethany don't pay attention nor does she realize about all the missing teenagers disapearring from her town but when she is kidnapped after a fight with her boyfriend and she has to walk home she is thrown into a wild game of life or death. Bethany wakes up and finds herself surrounded by teenage boys and girls she soon is included in a escape plan including 6 other teens besides her. Basically they escape but the kidnappers kill one girl and slice open Bethany's leg and she ends up getting blood poisoning. Along the way to safety, one of the boys named Levi, helps nurse her leg but its not getting better and they get feelings for each other. ( Gotta have some romance)! Anyways they discover that the world has been overrun by blue bloods ( similar to zombies) because of a airborne disease created by scientists and spread by the new president. The kids and the team of good scientists are thrown into another game but this time it is to stop the virus and save the world.

Which one do you like best??
Any ideas on how to improve them or anything.?
Three answers:
Noa
2012-05-04 17:42:44 UTC
Werewolves and vampires are getting old. Honestly, can't you choose some other mythical creature? I'm really tired of seeing them everywhere.
Renee
2012-05-04 17:42:46 UTC
I personally like the first one better. I find it more interesting. It seems like the 2nd idea is done WAY to much. Although personlly, i prefer books with a male main charater. But thats just me. But i think that Caroline shouldn't be a succubus or witch, just a girl who sees her dead boyfriend. If you add succubus to the mix, it might get confusing.
Luciamaria Ridge
2012-05-04 17:44:53 UTC
I like the second one.


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