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2010-07-10 11:56:07 UTC
named Bud Holiday and an illegal immagrant Jose Cortez), and emails Evan has been recieving from an unknown source about Matthew's death as well as the regular story. Here is what I have so far. Tell me if you like the plot, the beginning, and please suggest a title for the story.
Chapter One
“What do you got?” “Nathaniel Jeffery Crawford, sixteen years old. Found him in a ditch, eighteen stab wounds to the chest and strangulation” I said. “Oh god, do they have any leads?” “No, so far we have one witness, a truck driver who goes by the name of Bud Holiday. Jack is interviewing him right now.” In all my eighteen years of police work, I had never seen such a gruseom crime as this. “Apparently he had just moved here from Deleware. His dad was the head of Crawford and Co., the major car manufacturer, they were an incredibly wealthy family.” “Hm... do you think the dad had anything to do with it?” “Nah, there is nothing that links the dad to the murder.” Heather paused for a moment and I suspected what she was going to say, “Officer Michaels, I’m not so sure I find you fit enough to handle this case at the moment.” “Heather, I’m fine. I can do this.” “Evan, please. You need to take some time to rest and grieve on your own.” “It’s been two months, I’ve already grieved more than I can take.” “Are you sure? It’s okay Evan if you want to take some time off.” “No, I have to support Cynthia and Gabby, we still have funeral bills to pay and-” I suddenly felt myself crying and I didn’t know why, I hated this, I wanted the crying and the grieving to stop. Heather stood up and patted me on the back. “I just... I don’t know what to do.” “I know, I know” she replied in a calming voice. “Here, solve this boy’s murder for Matthew. You can provide the closer for one family like your son never had, help them out Evan.”