I need someone to critique my book plz?

Question

I have the first chapter of my new novel "BloodLust" (it's not it's usual meaning, but "blood" and "lust" being separate but having like one meaning, it's hard to explain), and I need people to give me some constructive criticism/feedback so I'll know how to proceed.
Give me your e-mail so I can send you the message.
Thanks :]

p.s I'm only 16 and a junior, so don't expect it to be too great, but I tried :]

Answer 1

You're welcome to email it to me. I may not be able to send it back within the hour, but I'll send it back sometime tonight.



My email is in my profile - feel free to email it to me there. I look forward to helping you. :)

Answer 2

Yeah you can send it to me I'll read it.

Answer 3

I am obviously not a professional but I like reading...

& you're welcome to email it to me! (email address should be open to my contacts)

Answer 4

[e-mail] :D

Answer 5

[e-mail]



crazydave1993*at*hot*mail*dot*com

Answer 6

please send it to me I'll be glad to help

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