Kieran Hudson
2011-11-19 09:33:51 UTC
It was a cold Sunday morning and one could see the frost accumulating on the cars outside of every house. Isaac, upon opening his bedroom curtains was blinded by the brightness of the sky which added to the pain of his headache, he reached up and placed his hand on his temple stroking it from side to side in attempt to make the pain subside with no success. Isaac just like everyone else in Grozny had been ordered by the newly ruling government to stop by the medical clinic on Brunswick road. Isaac arrived at the clinic which was only 7 miles away from his home but due to the weather and slippery roads it took him longer than expected. Isaac and everyone else was forced to have a chip implanted into their heads and the government said it would improve their memory, Isaac was always forgetting things and he never knew anything of his life before the age of 7 and immediately thought it was a good idea and even thought it would prevent his morning headaches.
He gazed around the room as people continued to line up for the procedure which took no longer than 3 minutes, some people however after being told they had to have a chip implanted inside themselves were reluctant to have the procedure, one person was heard shouting to everyone “Don't listen to 'em, they're turning us into robots! Slavs I tell ye! Slavs!” Isaac assumed he meant slaves and still amongst the crowd he recognised the voice being shouted across the room. It was Rupert Hunter, that old fool Isaac thought to himself, Rupert was known by everybody to be a little strange 'eccentric' the people in top hats called him. Isaac began his journey home and by the time he left the clinic the roads were filled with cars and after ten minutes of slow driving on the frost covered roads he saw what looked like a new building was in the process of being constructed, it looked like the usual construction site blocked off by barbed wire fencing, Isaac thought it was to be a site for a new power source.
It was Monday morning and Isaac awoken from his bed unwillingly with another thumping headache he switched on his bedroom light and looked at himself in the mirror, his skin had turned white and slick and his arms full of noticeable bulging veins which could be seen from a distance his left eye was replaced with a metal ocular implant. Then suddenly a robotic voice had interrupted his thoughts.
“Your life, as it has been, is over. From this time forward, you will service us. Resistance is futile” the voice said slowly as it was easily understandable and had not needed to be repeated. Isaac reacted to the voice as if he had heard it millions of times and without fear responded to the voice “We will serve you” he said in a jingoistic manner the voices of many people could be heard masked behind his own voice inside his mind Isaac was somehow connected to each individual with the implanted chip and was able to have access to everyone’s thoughts and ideas. Everyone's location including Isaac's was able to be tracked by the government if anything were to malfunction with the chip and each person was given an individual designated code so it could easily be entered into the government's database. Isaac's code was C1535.
(So somehow i want Isaac to escape from the chips control and try to escape but in the end he fails and i don't know what to write and i probably need some ideas of what he does before he actually becomes free of the chip, i need 400 more words not that i'm asking you for 400 words but ideas that i can develop into that amount.)