Little Miss Wolf <3
2009-05-03 17:46:25 UTC
Suddenly, everything was moving very fast. Everything around her was a blur, the trees, the ferns, the ground underfoot. It was strange, she felt shorter. The dirt beneath her feet was much closer than it had ever seemed to be, and she didn’t rise to as great of a height on the trees. Maybe they were just bigger in this part of the forest. That could make sense, right? But at this moment, she really couldn’t tell what made sense and what didn’t, she just knew that she had to run. Her stomach rumbled, urging her onwards. She could smell better than she ever had before, and she smelled it up ahead, she could smell it’s fear, it’s desperate battle against her speed to escape. But it knew that she was approaching quickly, and that soon it’s battle would be lost. Kalii’s mouth started to moisten at the thought, and she urged her feet onwards.
Then, she saw it.
It stood a few feet ahead of her, brown eyes huge, ears flickering nervously. It’s legs were long and lean, and it was covered in light brown fur. A deer, she knew. She had never seen one before, yet she suddenly knew what it was. She let out a feral sounding snarl, which seemed to echo again and again throughout the forest. But that didn’t make sense either. Forest’s didn’t create echoes. She swiveled her head to the side, wondering where the snarl had come from. What she saw shocked her. Next to her stood a giant black wolf, it’s fangs bared, eyes alight with passion. She turned her head to the right, and saw another wolf, this one grey. She should have been scared, but she wasn’t. For some reason, this felt right. The way it was supposed to be. Snarling even more ferociously than either of her feral brethren, she leapt at the deer, snapping her jaws in a sudden rage. The hit their target, teeth sinking into the warm skin of the animal’s neck, and pulling free vigorously. Brown hair soaked in blood fell to the ground slowly, like leaves. Blood spurted out of the deer’s throat as it let out a cry, and began to run again. But her teammates were upon it, slashing with tooth and claw at the helpless creature’s legs and haunches. Blood on her lips, Kalii leapt again, hungry for more. The bloodlust crashed over her like a wave, and she snapped her teeth shut on the deer’s side, tearing off as much skin as she could manage, feeling the warm, fresh blood pour from it’s wounds and surround her mouth, making her face feel strange and sticky.
Then the deer began to fall, crying out a second time as it did so, crashing to the forest floor with a dull thud. Kalii snarled at the other two wolves, telling them to back off. They bent their heads and tails and did so, respectively waiting for her to eat her fill before they took any for themselves. Still crazed from the hunt, Kalii loped up to the dead creature, and grabbed a large piece of it’s insides with her teeth. It was soft, not too chewy, and tasted better than anything that had ever touched her tongue before. Feeling strong, powerful, and slightly crazed with pleasure, she tipped her blood-soaked face to the sky, light from the stars and the moon dancing upon her back, filtered in through the many leaves. Blinking at the gorgeous sky above, she opened her lips and let out a long, beautiful howl, before falling to the ground.
Then, all was dark.
Ummm kalli's a person and she's having a vision and she doesn't realize she's a wolf :P ha. And no, it's not a story about some girl who has visions. This is probably the only vision she'll ever have =/
It's part of my story... good writing or no? Was I too descriptive? I tend to have a problem with that :P