Does This Story Have Potential?

Question

I want to do a story where a slob or slacker and his weird wife make a businesses out of sealing dope, cocaine, and marijuana. The story will follow their lives as they bicker and fight over the dumbest things ever. The story also will follow strange characters who walks in and out of their lives causing very commotion. To death, to betrayel, to honor, and to the life with drugs. The story is set in the era of the 70s or something like that. I already got all the characters made. It want be those movie like Judd apatow makes, it is a very serious story bug with elements that will make you laugh. So does this story have potential is it original?

Answer 1

I would say that it has potential, but only to a specific audience.

This would be popular for the kind of people *cough* I mean bottom-feeding worms no offense *cough* that watch Family Guy or Futurama or shows like that, but not with the general populace. Definitely not for otaku or bookish audience like me. In short, I'd throw the story into a trash compacting shuttle bound for the nearest star, but another person might actually read it.

Answer 2

It has a bit of potential, but it sounds like a Weed rip off in my opinion. The summary you're giving here sounds a bit forced, as if you're trying to hard to be original. Using some common traits in a story is still good, you should try it. Other than that, it sound like it has some potential, it just needs a bit more work.

Answer 3

Definitely an original O.O erm some potential. But it sort of seems like you don't really have a climax to the story nor any rising action.

Answer 4

Peter did have his faults. Jesus was not blind to those. However Jesus, like his Father, Jehovah, used to be continuously looking for the great in people. Jesus noticed much knowledge in Peter, and He sought to support him build on these excellent traits. Jehovah and his Son look for the great in us in these days too. We may have a hard time believing that there is much excellent in us for them to find. Nonetheless, we have got to believe their perspective and prove ourselves willing to be informed and molded as Peter used to be.—1 John three:19, 20.

Answer 5

Well, I wouldn't read it. Maybe some other people would....