Question:
Do you think that these are good poem i want the truth?
kris42008
2006-02-22 23:13:25 UTC
the title is called My Child To Early
He wakes up with a smile and that special lookin his eyes
He screams for me to bring him his milk and favorite bunny. Im there akready
I change his diaper, while he sucks his bottle
Man, that baby sure can swallow.
I give him a bath as a school bus pulls into port
I look at him and say that could have been me sport
I take him to daycare as i head off to work
Knowing life will never be the same because i had a child at 15
Life isn't going to end
Everything will just begin over again.

Thank you for telling the truth please if you like it don't steal it thanks
Three answers:
flutterinbutterfly
2006-02-22 23:15:07 UTC
awwwwwwww! I think it is very good! And sweet!

Hugs to you!!! :)
suenos
2006-02-23 07:16:53 UTC
truth is...its wonderful!
2006-02-23 07:16:47 UTC
It is as good as you want it to be. Personally, it reminds me of a.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................penny


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