Does this sound like an interesting book? I'm trying to become a writer at the age of 13:P?

Question

The title of the book is Forever Fangs. it's about a 13 year old girl named Tori Heart. She was changed when she was 8 years old by a premature vampire in an ally on the way home from school.Now that she's 13 she's in the Premature Stage of her vampireisum. Will she loose controll? will she die? or will she continue on to stage 4. Full Vampire? Tori starts school, and when a new student sexy Danny Smith comes into classes with Tori they start to be come friends. Then Tori starts bloodlust and almost looses it. Theres a twist in the last 10 chapters ;)

What do u think? I'll put up a more detailed chapter 1 if u guys think this is good. Be honest. tell me if i need to put more drama, becuase tat wasnt tall of it in the thing i told u about. so be honest! thanks!

Answer 1

All I can say is that it SOUNDS good. So don't take this next bit as an offense. I am trying to help you!!



However your going to have to be clever if you want this story to be unique. The fact of the matter is, is that there are hundreds of books being fueled out of publishing houses at the moment (thank you twilight *coughs*) and so your story, to be successful, is going to have to have something a little different. If you want to get published your opening chapter is going to have to grasp there attention. They know what will make them money, and what is already on the market because that's what they're paid to know!



Overall I do like the sound of your novel but make sure you put in a plot twist of some sort (do your research!!!).



Look forward to seeing more from you though!



Bekah

Answer 2

What new twist does your story bring to the vampire genre? Okay, she's blood-lusting after another teen. Not really original. Maybe focus on her having to deal with the different stages of turning into a vampire, and that can possibly bring about some originality. Focusing on a love-relationship between a vamp and human, and how vamp lusts after human and wants to kill it has been done to death.



Now, this doesn't mean there shouldn't be a love-interested. I'm just saying that it shouldn't be the main plot; it can be a sub-plot, but the main plot should focus on something other than vamp/human relationship.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Well to be honest the whole Twilight fad has really got vampires too popular. It's a good idea, but I'm kinda sick of vampires. If you prove that you're a better writer than Stephanie Meyer, though, well maybe I would read this. :)



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Answer 5

It sounds like a very good and creative book. I would love to hear the first page or 2!! But fantasy/horror books bore me really. I hate twilight and all films like that :D But seriously your story sounds VERY good. And Im very fussy about my books :)



Answer to your question: YES IT DOES!! VERY INTERESTING!! :D

Answer 6

i think a teenage vampire is something that's quite new. daily teenage problems with vampirical taste to it. go with it.

just don't do vampire-human love story anymore. it's cliche.

Answer 7

I love the idea, and good luck to you!