Question:
What is a good name for my two getting published novels? Are there plots good enough? Which is better? HELP?
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2009-06-03 00:31:00 UTC
BTW, I am twelve. Unlike twelve year olds, my story isn't about vampires and fairies.

This is the first plot:
The setting is Albuquerque. Jessica Dixon is graduating from High school. She has the perfect life. Perfect boy friend, Perfect BFF and she is a pioneer planning to be a scientist. Her life is turned over when she breaks up with her boy friend, which happens to be the love of her life Clyde Bruno. Nine years pass, she still is a single. She is in a total depression which she lasts in for nine years and all her dream of being a scientist is stopped while she turns like best friends to the job, a kindergarten teacher. Clyde marries a lady called Amanda and they move to LA, giving birth to a child called Mike. For Jessica life became a boring routine. One day, Clyde and Amanda get divorced and so Clyde move back to the place he grew up in which he grew up, Albuquerque. Mike is now going to Kindergarten. Jessica's safe life turns up side down when Clyde's son is in her class and so with the start of the year they both start meeting with a strict parent/teacher relationship. Jessica still deeply loves him and he loves her but she keeps on putting her mind in front of her heart and so that's a problem. The relationship slowly gets less like a parent/teacher relationship and Clyde starts getting more flirtatious and so they kiss. Jessica gets depressed more by that. Where as all this is happening, their high school friends are doing all kinds of stuff to try to get them together including blind dates. After they kiss Jessica rejects giving him another chance and says that she doesn't want to have a relationship with him. She then tries to date others to forget him but it doesn't work. At the time Jessica is dating others, He is trying to hate her and forget her, unfortunately, and he can't. She start flirting with him on the parent's night, he doesn't talk to her and treat her just like a parent treats a teacher. In the end she tries to suicide he rescues her, they happily make up.

This is the second plot:
Dimitri Haskell is a Russian who lives in Italy. We track his story since he was young with his parent's divorce, his high school love and his life going on in an unhappy way, when Lissa his dearly loved girlfriend dies. He falls into a depression, his mother, who is now the editor of the squib magazine, pushes a girl towards him who would help him be away from the depression. She is called Beth, the ex-wife of a police-man called Jenks, A sexy lady. He had an affair with her and then she dumps him to go back to her ex. He falls into a deeper depression, his best friend then suggest him to go live for a while in a relaxing place called ((La Faviere)) in France. He goes there into the beautiful scenery and to his surprise he discovers that Jenks went there for relaxation too. They befriend each other and at last he tells him about his past too. The story mainly shows flash backs of lives of different people and how people could have different reactions. Beth then seeks revenge from Jenks for something in the past between them. Dimitri gets the job he always dreamt of, an author. He falls in love for a girl called Amber and Jenks fall for her sister. It isn't a totally happy ending because Dimitri's mother gets into an accident and so she dies. His father dies too committing suicide revealing that he always loved Mrs. Haskell although they got divorced. Jenks gets killed and at last Beth dies in prison giving birth to Jenks's son. Amber is sterile and so they adopt Beth's son. Life goes on.
Three answers:
Spycez Forever!
2009-06-03 01:54:13 UTC
I'm twelve to but i always right about people in the 12- 16 range. NEVER people older then that, NEVER! (ok maybe i do sometimes write about someone 17 or 18, but hardly ever!) i don't know how adults think, so i can't really write about them, can I? but other then that they sound really good! i'd probably read them.



I just write whatever comes into my head, no matter if it's vampires or fairies.

Hope i see your books in the shop one day!

p.s that is not a plot, a plot should be 4 or 5 lines at the most!
telefantastical
2009-06-03 00:43:36 UTC
There is a reason why 12 years old right about fantastical things. A 12 year old doesn't have the life experience of understanding of things to convincingly write about events that happen to more mature or young adult characters. No matter how talented a writer you are adults will see through a 12 year old writing about adults. No matter how smart you are or how good a writer you are. There is no intellectual substitution for experience. That is why young authors write about stuff meant for younger audiences, and if you are going to write, then you should stick to something in the tween ages type of subjects.
Echion
2009-06-03 00:41:04 UTC
Did you really need these many words to describe the plot of both stories?

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