Question:
what are some good title's for this story?
?
2012-01-15 14:23:21 UTC
so i have a few in mind, but i really want to know what interests you? what would you name it? this is what its about:

A girl name Ruby lives back during Queens and Kings, Their is a beast that attacks her village and kills her sister. Ruby raises her sister from the dead without knowing how she had done it. She is blamed for witchcraft and sentenced to death. She runs away before she dies and feels a strange pull in a certain direction, the pull leads her to a cottage were other teens are living. they all have powers and are trying to figure out how they got them. they soon find out that a woman (Eliza) from the future came back in time because the time she lives in is not doing so well, so she went back in time, deposited different powers to 10 different babies, when they grow older they are meant to make living easier by using their helpful powers. they start with Ruby's village, they turn it into a paradise, other kingdoms become jealous and they attack Ruby's kingdom and destroy it, the Children Of Eliza decide to wait for a time in the future that society can accept them and what they can do so they can begin the transformation of society.

things you may want to know:
-after using their powers for the first time they can live forever if unharmed (can live forever if not killed or sick)
-the beast that attacks the village ends up being one of The Children of Eliza

so yeah here are some of my ideas:
-Unearthed (because she unearthed her sister and unearthed the secrets of the children of eliza)
-The Children Of Eliza
-The Ten
-A Chance To Prove Herself
-The Pull
-Blamed
-City Of Tomorrow
-When The Time Is Right

^do you like one of those or what do you suggest? thank you for your answers :) (please no stupid comments, i already have a publisher and editor for my book and this needs to be serious)
Three answers:
Sweeter S
2012-01-15 14:42:54 UTC
-The Children Of Eliza and -City Of Tomorrow sound the best.

The Children of Eliza sounds almost biblical, but in a good way :) I can even picture the title cover now.

City of Tomorrow just sounds plain awesome, but more sort of science-fictiony and is probably taken. Children of Eliza is new :)
em
2012-01-15 22:43:51 UTC
Sounds very interesting!

The Children of Eliza is what popped out to me. Congrats on already having a publisher and whatnot!
?
2012-01-15 22:26:39 UTC
I think Children of Eliza would be the best choice. Great story idea, too.

It's very creative!


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